look pretty good to me, good job on it. ^^

Thank you.

-HM-

Hey ^^

I like the hand that is by the body, but there is is just something odd about the proportion on the hand holding the curved weapon. The body proportions look good. :)

The light source coming from behind... can the face be a bit darker so those glowing red eyes become even more menacing?

Hope this is constructive criticism. ^^

Thank you.

The bad thing is is that some of these mistakes you don't notice until you're actually through with the piece, or you feel you need to move on. And that hand was killing me, to, I just didn't know what it was.

Eventually you start remembering as you keep drawing.
And the mistakes that you move on from.... I get tired of mine too. LOL
I'll just give up after erasing so many times. :)

The doorway on the 'XX' building seems too short to me, and the wall graffiti seems like it should be fading out faster than it does (far end should be more to a point) Kinna hard to explain....
Otherwise, it looks good!

Thank you, Dak.

-HM-

The size of the door was already mentioned by someone else, and I second that.

The perspective, while technically correct, feels forced. One-point perspective always feels a bit weird to me, and almost always a two or three point is better suited.

The palette could use some unification. The colors feel chosen at random, and vary wildly. The piece could benefit greatly from choosing a palette of limited colors (think 2-4 main colors that go well together)

I'm being really picky of course. My main complaint is that while I don't think there's much technically -wrong- with this piece, the whole thing feels overall muddy and imprecise, almost as though it's a rough color concept and is not really finished. It's hard to tell what some things in the picture actually are. The 'bushes' on top of the wall for instance, I recognize because of color alone. The Xs on the sign are hastily colored, not even to the edges. If your trouble is getting bored with the piece partway through, then I'd suggest leaving out the main focus until the end. I always color my BGs first because then I get the character (My favorite part) at the end, and finish on a high note. If I do characters first, then the BG seems boring and I slop through it.

Guess you're right. Sometimes, it's hard for me to break that habit because I have the character drawn first and then I have the background to support it. With this one, though, I drew the character first, then hid it to do the background. I was practicing with perspectives, and the one point perspective is usually the one that goes with stuff like this. On that note, are you suggesting that it's better to use two or three point perspectives for compositions like this?

I'm trying to get to a point where I can make complex schedules (within schedule).

Thank you again for the critique, though.

You all color and it gets even more scare looking.

Thank you.

it looks good to me ^^
sorry i dont know how to critisize >.<

It's okay. Thank you, anyway.