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[MTG] Karoon of the Cursed Crystel + Discord, the Wolf Demon
by Katerchen
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12 years ago
And my second card. This is actually a dual card, making use of the 'Transform' Keyword as explained in the Magic rules. But it's all just fancy talk for a card which has two sides and where one can be switched to other through some means. In this case the ticket is one way. Another creation for Mirri :)
Karoon, Discord ©
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Karoon, Discord ©
Art ©
Created with help of the very nice GNU licensed Magic Set Editor (http://magicseteditor.sourceforge.net/welcome)
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Also here a few wording suggestions:
"When Karoon of the Cursed Crystal would die, transform him instead.
{2}{B}: Put a 1/1 black Nightmare creature token with shadow onto the battlefield (*Reminder text*).
{2}{R}: Karoon deals 2 damage to target creature. A creature dealt damage this way can't be regenerated this turn."
You can change the regeneration restriction if you want, so that it only applies, when Karoon would kill the creature with his ability. But I don't exactly know the wording for this case.
For reference:
Jaya Ballard, Task Mage: http://magiccards.info/pd2/en/10.html
Other side:
It's very unusual that a black/red creature has vigilance, this is a typical ability for white, sometimes green creatures.
Besides that, you should mention the name of the card in the regeneration ability:
"{1}{1}{B}: Regenerate Discord, the Wolf Demon."
Also if you want, that the transformed card has a color, you must use the color indicator. Reference: Howlpack Alpha http://magiccards.info/isd/en/193b.html
The transformed card has no mana cast and therefore no color if not mentioned otherweise.
So glad to get tips from a professional ^.^ I am sure that I will get better in time. I barely ever played magic. Only have 20 Boosters worldwake xD Funny enough I drew Jace, Mind Sculptor.
Still i don't read nearly enough cards to be consistent with my texts ... yet
I wanted to express that he just doesn't tire ... but on the other Hand, I might just go with trample after all, give him 5/4 instead of vigilance
As with your other tip I will have to wait until the evening, before I can make changes.
5/4 Trample with a regenerate ability looks decent, not too strong, not too weak.
I would assume that going into such a forum would be a rather rigid form of quality control, when it comes to balance. Maybe when I feel a little more accomplished.