Uh-oh....


(but on the other hand, look at the pretty picture I drawed, Daddy!)

11/10 drawing skills, Zee-Zee :P

Oh noooooooooo I know what's going to happen.

OHHHHH NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!

*cries and hides in corner*

wat man wat is it cheatting?

Love that avertar

Thanks ^.^ Sylph-space drew it, not me, btw. I just commissioned it of my OC.

... Oh, come on, I just start reading on this page and already I feel sorry for him.

God damn it, aha...

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Anyway, I really like the at style, and I'm looking forward to reading through all of this. *whimpers and winces*

I apologise in advance....this comic has been going err...4 years so my drawing skills at the beginning kinda sucked...but if you stick with teh story and ignore the art for a while I hope you enjoy the comic

they didn't suck Gemma =3 I still think they're good along with your new pages ^^

Hey, the more we do something, the better at it we get. Kind of like a fine wine, it improves with age. Besides, I can't draw at all, so I'm appreciative of those who can, and I think this has been great. I really am enjoying all of this, and thank you for the latest page.

Oh the suspense D:
poor guy

His twin acting like daddy, being treated like daddy, usurping his spot as daddy D:

Ok now gems dream from before she was born makes more sense, it really was her father, but she didn't know that they were twins. I love this comic!

Well, Zee-Zee stated that that WAS, in fact, Souffle.

Yeah. Saw this coming. Souffle doing the old switch out. I'm not that surprised really. (because Souffle was the one who dated her first and she left) It's just too bad that it had to cause a chain of events like this.

Oh, bleep

Eeep

oh... so it wasn't that the contraceptive failed...
But that gem is outgoing brother's kid, not quiet brother's. O.o

You should be writing movie scripts, you know that right?

I see a Jerry Springer episode >w>

*chants* Jerry! Jerry! Jerry! Jerry! Jerry!

poor guy. after all that work. he end up a broken heart.

He's so tired, he's holding that pen wrong! (Sorry I couldn't resist)

Do not tell that Souffle was found kissing, hugging and lying in bed with Abbey. That would certainly upset the other twin. What is the other twin's name? Is it Ulfslof, an anagram of Souffle?

According to earlier pages, his name is Jack.

I found this on the front page of FA and read through to this one in a few hours. Consider me hooked.

*nods* I saw you favouriting various pages, it's always interesting seeing which old pages people favourite. Thank you for spending the hour or two working your way through this

My pleasure, I look forward to reading more!

called it, his twin knocked her up.

Can he get work at home job?

You are not the father?

They are twins so Maury could not sort this one out.

I always love when a new page of this comic shows up. Just love reading this such nice art and a great story. Looking forward to the next page alot :)

The brother took her away from him he was there all the time.
So working all the time they fell distance then the anger consumed him

:o *suspense* I'm soooo nervous! You certainly know how to keep the audience hook. As always, this comic and it's story has been a delight to read and I'm looking forward to seeing the end result.

dang I feel bad for him....

This bad guy story is so saddddddddd I can't be mad at him

Uh-oh, I see betray in the keywords. This will not go well.

I CAN SEE AN AFFAIR IN THIS FUTURE.

I think i know what he found....STACKS UPON STACKS OF SYRUPY WAFFLES!

Without whipped cream or strawberries, thus explaining his horror.

Everyone saying the outgoing twin in Gem's dad. Honestly I hadn't picked up on that but I can see what's coming here. Only big question in my mind is was gem's mom aware of the fact she was cheating. They are twins after all and grew up together so it might be possible for one to believably take the place of the other without the other realizing it. Oh I can't wait to see more.

Also damn Gem you make wittle ZeeZee look so gosh darn adorable. ^^

I think it doesn't matter which brother is really Gem's dad; Jack believed whatever best drove his fears, and those fears drove him off the deep end.

Well.... With all the jobs he has to take to make money she should of at least been suspicious that he is home all the time. If she did not know then she purposely turned a blind eye.

i sense feels comming

Ow my heart just snapped. T.T

Oh boy this is looking more and more like its going somewhere that really shows why one went sour. I feel sorry for the guy.

i just read through this in the past couple hours. omg its so good. i need more omg.

OK, I've just updated my Found Index to this page, and I'm still fascinated by this story!

Also, others have probably realized this already, but Gemma's now really seriously dreaming about events that happened before she was born. In the hypnosis session she had with Dr. Kitsune she "remembered" something from before her birth, but that can happen as the mind takes scraps of information and fills in the space between. But now she's on her own, not guided at all, and a traumatic figure she barely remembers is telling her things she can't have known. I mean, ZeeZee told her about something that happened just after her birth, which people can't remember either, but that's because of brain physiology. This is just plain she-didn't-exist-yet impossible. Meaning that something supernatural or at least very freaky is happening here.

And it gives me the creeps. We don't know what he is, other than that he's based on her memories of someone she was scared of from a very young age, who looked like someone else she was very happy to be around. What is he? How is he preventing Gemma from defending herself? Why can't her good memories help her now?

And when are those pills going to kick in? I know firsthand that you don't go into REM sleep the instant your head hits the pillow unless you have a sleep disorder like narcolepsy. I also know that no pill takes effect instantly, and that dreams can really mess with your sense of time. If the pills take effect 30 minutes after she swallows them, but she's been dreaming that whole time, it can feel like hours or days have passed by the time those 30 minutes pass in the real world. But maybe she hasn't been dreaming that whole time? It normally takes hours for you to get into REM sleep. Maybe the pills have taken effect, all they're going to, and they're just not working for her?

You are such a clever bunny.

Well, maybe and maybe not. I'm super good at outsmarting myself though!

I tried hard not to speculate about what's going to happen, just about what is happening.

Wow. This is getting good.

I have a feeling this is gonna be just a huge misunderstanding. He'll probably find Souffle getting a little too touchy-feely with Nicole's belly, and without any context he's gonna get completely the wrong idea.

All this... for nothing?? Wow, Jack really needs to start over in life.

*hides from da scarinesses*

So, is there sex happening? I mean, that might scare the baby. Just imagine if a dick suddenly just starting thrusting itself into your home repeatedly. That'd freak me out.

Too deep declare pug laser beam.

Oh dear. I know where this is going.