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Last Updated: Dec. 19, 2010
Don't be such a fuss! It's just a little cold, that's all.
Inspired partially by the latest prompt, by the fire; partially by one of the major stories I was writing at the moment; partially by a rather uneasy stomach of my own; and partially by that darn sneezefurs.org banner. Curse you, cute little sneezes! Curse you!
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Mac- mah... Ahhh... Ahhh... AHCHOO!
... Snkrt.
ENJOY!
Don't be such a fuss! It's just a little cold, that's all.
Inspired partially by the latest prompt, by the fire; partially by one of the major stories I was writing at the moment; partially by a rather uneasy stomach of my own; and partially by that darn sneezefurs.org banner. Curse you, cute little sneezes! Curse you!
Vertigo, Inc. Series:
<<< PREV | FIRST | NEXT >>>
Content warnings:
Mac- mah... Ahhh... Ahhh... AHCHOO!
... Snkrt.
ENJOY!
Category Story / Macro / Micro
Species Dog (Other)
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 6.8 kB
Ah, its kinda good. I wonder where the sneezing epidemic would have begun?
Maybe a race of microscopic bug of annoying the crap out of everyone and breeding in their boogers? God I have the wierdest ideas...
I'd rate this story a 8/10.
It could use better detail to describe some situations, but other than that it is well thought out and fine.
Maybe a race of microscopic bug of annoying the crap out of everyone and breeding in their boogers? God I have the wierdest ideas...
I'd rate this story a 8/10.
It could use better detail to describe some situations, but other than that it is well thought out and fine.
Cute. Nice. I was totally lost when the doctor appeared. But yeah, this was probably the second or third story featuring macros I have ever read. And I still find it a bit awkward. But the plot is nice, the character interaction is good, the story is entertaining and humorous. Good work.
Heh, getting sneezed out, that's inventive. I have the same dillema in my novel at one point, on fire little, big gal too afraid to pet it out, so she scoops him into her mouth and washes him around, swiftly extinguishing him with her tongue and saliva. She spits him out before he can get to traumatised by where he's been :P
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