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Barry finds his world turned upside-down by a vengeful ex-girlfriend. Not that being different is always a bad thing. Space travel exists but doesn't happen in this story.
This story contains TF into a wolf-taur, and it takes a while.
Part 4 of 4.
The term GELF stands for Genetically Engineered Life Form, and in this story it refers to beings that were genetically built from the ground up and are not 'born' in the sense that they have a mom and dad. GELFs are created by making an egg with a custom-made embryo designed for a specific task or application. All GELFs can talk, and although most of them are humanoid in shape none of them look exactly like a human (mostly for legal reasons). Most have fur or feathers, and snouts or beaks; many of them have tails.
GELFs have a contract of indentured servitude until they turn 100 years old. Since their lifespan should be around 400 years, it's considered morally justified. As the year this story is set is 2268, there haven't been too many GELFs that have died of old age. I have a bunch of thoughts about these GELFs, so if you have any questions, ask.
I'm borrowing the term from
chaz-fox although I'm not too fond of the idea of creatures without mouths or nostrils. The GELFs in my story are fully biological (they need to eat, breathe, sleep, etc), although they are usually slightly stronger, faster, and tougher than a human.
There is no universal numbering scheme for GELFs. Swear words are typically avoided.
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This story contains TF into a wolf-taur, and it takes a while.
Part 4 of 4.
The term GELF stands for Genetically Engineered Life Form, and in this story it refers to beings that were genetically built from the ground up and are not 'born' in the sense that they have a mom and dad. GELFs are created by making an egg with a custom-made embryo designed for a specific task or application. All GELFs can talk, and although most of them are humanoid in shape none of them look exactly like a human (mostly for legal reasons). Most have fur or feathers, and snouts or beaks; many of them have tails.
GELFs have a contract of indentured servitude until they turn 100 years old. Since their lifespan should be around 400 years, it's considered morally justified. As the year this story is set is 2268, there haven't been too many GELFs that have died of old age. I have a bunch of thoughts about these GELFs, so if you have any questions, ask.
I'm borrowing the term from
chaz-fox although I'm not too fond of the idea of creatures without mouths or nostrils. The GELFs in my story are fully biological (they need to eat, breathe, sleep, etc), although they are usually slightly stronger, faster, and tougher than a human. There is no universal numbering scheme for GELFs. Swear words are typically avoided.
<<< PREV | FIRST | NEXT >>>
Category Story / Transformation
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I felt is was a pretty decent story. Not many people do transformations the long way so kudos. It took a little bit to get down when he was speaking and thinking but by the 2nd and third parts it didn't bother me all that much. I'd be cool if we got a little blurb about Barry and how he's doing during the newt epilogue even if it seemed as if not much had changed the epilogue would feel more like an ending instead of an add on/segue.
This is probably only a problem for me since I have a black color scheme for my computer but whatever color you actually use gets made into black so all of the pages look blank. I just highlighted everything and made it white to fix it. Thought it was broken at first.
This is probably only a problem for me since I have a black color scheme for my computer but whatever color you actually use gets made into black so all of the pages look blank. I just highlighted everything and made it white to fix it. Thought it was broken at first.
I was going to complain about the definition of 'assault rifle', but it seems this has been more or less correctly defined. Namely: small caliber with select-fire capability. An AR10 and an AK47 are not assault rifles, the caliber is too big. Even if those two mentioned guns have a select-fire lever, they are called battle rifles, as would the BAR.
This fiction felt really organic, and not boringly so. The second-person narrative was only ever so slightly annoying, but is probably the best second-person thing I've ever read. Because of the organic-ness of this, and second-person in general, there was hardly any comedic or action/fun... just slice of life. There really was not a happy ending either. Not a bad one or sad, happy, fun, or otherwise... just... a slice of life ending... which is rather boring in general. Then again, I've always been a fan of the 1950's&60's style of fiction where science has to happen fast to save the day from the looming evil. Back then, in a way, things really were rather like that. But at this point I'm deviating from this fiction, so I digress.
Short version: I had fun reading it.
Cheers
This fiction felt really organic, and not boringly so. The second-person narrative was only ever so slightly annoying, but is probably the best second-person thing I've ever read. Because of the organic-ness of this, and second-person in general, there was hardly any comedic or action/fun... just slice of life. There really was not a happy ending either. Not a bad one or sad, happy, fun, or otherwise... just... a slice of life ending... which is rather boring in general. Then again, I've always been a fan of the 1950's&60's style of fiction where science has to happen fast to save the day from the looming evil. Back then, in a way, things really were rather like that. But at this point I'm deviating from this fiction, so I digress.
Short version: I had fun reading it.
Cheers
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