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Weary and lacking direction, Ryouji and friends rest up in Yamakage while Ryouji sends a letter to his master, asking for help. However, the townsfolks' celebrations are cut short by the arrival of Delta Archer Udezuku and his Fangs of the Wind God!
Completely rewritten because I didn't like how the battle went in the original. I moved it to scraps in case you want to compare. Of course, if you've read that one, then you know how this ends, so if you haven't, read this first, it'll be more exciting. :B I guess sometimes, the first way you think of something is the best.
I think I'm gonna get on episode 15 now.
BEFORE CRITIQUING: please click "FIRST" and refer to the critiquer's note in the first chapter. Thank you.
Weary and lacking direction, Ryouji and friends rest up in Yamakage while Ryouji sends a letter to his master, asking for help. However, the townsfolks' celebrations are cut short by the arrival of Delta Archer Udezuku and his Fangs of the Wind God!
Completely rewritten because I didn't like how the battle went in the original. I moved it to scraps in case you want to compare. Of course, if you've read that one, then you know how this ends, so if you haven't, read this first, it'll be more exciting. :B I guess sometimes, the first way you think of something is the best.
I think I'm gonna get on episode 15 now.
BEFORE CRITIQUING: please click "FIRST" and refer to the critiquer's note in the first chapter. Thank you.
Category Story / Anime
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