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Udezuku is so strong, so incredibly powerful, Ryouji has but one recourse: to unleash his own incredible power, the forbidden technique: Dragon Lunge!

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A mite melodramatic, perhaps. :B But true enough.

I'm excited once again. :D This is where the story really gets awesome. I am so happy to finally be at this point in OAR, and I can't wait to show you guys what comes next!

I think what happened with the first version of 14 is that... well, Udezuku is too fucking powerful. c.c I made it so there HAS to be a deus ex machina to save Ryouji, more or less. I tried to play that down in this revision, but... Well, this is what you get. And of course, if you read the first version of 14, you know how the ends... more or less. Yes, some things changed, and I'm glad they did. So reread, enjoy, and see where the path takes our friends. :)

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