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Critique Requests - December 2010
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Welcome to the December 2010 Critique Request journal. This is a place where artists can request critique from the community on specific piece(s) of their art. Posting does not guarantee you will receive a critique, of course, but could make it much more likely! :) All are welcome to participate (you need not be a member of i_love_critique) but please read the rules before posting.
RULES:
1. You may submit ONLY your own art for critique.
2. Fill out the form (below) for EACH image URL, and cut & paste it into your comment.
3. All art types are welcome (visual, music, writing, etc.) but please specify the medium in your request, so people with expertise in that medium can find you more easily.
4. Please limit your total number of pieces linked to 5 (or fewer) per journal, so as not to spam/overwhelm other users. Whenever possible, please post multiple image URLs into a single comment.
5. As always, please be polite and respecful of eachother, and leave constructive feedback whenever you can.
6. Trolls and troublemakers will be unceremoniously banned.
7. Have fun!
FORM:
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Title:
URL:
Adult Content: yes/no
Is it finished?: yes/no
Media:
Any specific areas you want help with:
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.):
Other Notes:
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RULES:
1. You may submit ONLY your own art for critique.
2. Fill out the form (below) for EACH image URL, and cut & paste it into your comment.
3. All art types are welcome (visual, music, writing, etc.) but please specify the medium in your request, so people with expertise in that medium can find you more easily.
4. Please limit your total number of pieces linked to 5 (or fewer) per journal, so as not to spam/overwhelm other users. Whenever possible, please post multiple image URLs into a single comment.
5. As always, please be polite and respecful of eachother, and leave constructive feedback whenever you can.
6. Trolls and troublemakers will be unceremoniously banned.
7. Have fun!
FORM:
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Title:
URL:
Adult Content: yes/no
Is it finished?: yes/no
Media:
Any specific areas you want help with:
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.):
Other Notes:
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Title:Dancin queen
URL:http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4826178/
Adult Content: yes/no; No.
Is it finished?: yes/no; Yes!
Media: Uhm..I used my tablet?
Any specific areas you want help with: I know the hands are off, and his nose is odd.
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): On the image please! But either is fine!
Other Notes:None, thank you!
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4279286
Adult Content: Nope
Is it finished?: Yep
Media: Pencil and paper
Any specific areas you want help with: I know it's an experience issue, but muzzles and wings never seem to come out for me
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): Preferable on the image itself.
Other Notes: Thank you in advance for any help.
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3544520/
Adult Content: NO
Is it finished?: YES
Media: bristol board, 2b to 9b pencils
Any specific areas you want help with: pencil shading, pencil texture creation in a more realistic way, good shading
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): on the image please
Other Notes:
It was originaly a school work for my art class, but decided to refine it longer.
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Title: Vermine, Khorath, sculpture
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3939833
Adult Content: NO
Is it finished?: NO
Media: sculpey
Any specific areas you want help with: better sculpting techniches, sculpture painting and realistic panting effects.
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): on the image pelase
Other Notes:
Again, another school work, this one is missing a good panitng job
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Title: Julious, the Raptor
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4574987
Adult Content: NO
Is it finished?: YES
Media: Photoshop CS5
Any specific areas you want help with: better photoshop shading techniches for a more realistic look, also texturing.
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): on the image please
Other Notes:
not drawn by me, i was only the painter, original drawing artist was Rotarr:
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URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4821254
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Digital
Any specific areas you want help with: Textures and anatomy
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): note/journal/on the image/anywhere im notified of
Other Notes: this would be a big help :D
URL:http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4811260/
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Paint tool SAI
Any specific areas you want help with: anatomy, lighting. general notes for my next attempt at a piece like this.
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): on the image
Other Notes: I noticed that the eye glow shouldn't have a streak like that with just a torso shot. I originally intended it to be a full body piece rather than a bust.
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4757894
Adult Content: No
Is it finished?: Yes
Media: Fully digital (GIMP 2.7.1)
Any specific areas you want help with: Realistic shading mainly, but all help will be appreciated!
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): On the image
Other Notes: N/A
URL:http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4757621/
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media: pencil lineart/digital coloring
Any specific areas you want help with: general
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): on the image
Other Notes:
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Title:White Noise
URL:http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4749889/
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media:pencil lineart/digital coloring
Any specific areas you want help with:general
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): on the image
Other Notes:
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Title:A heavy dose of Atmosphere
URL:http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4801630/
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media:pencil lineart/digital coloring
Any specific areas you want help with: compisition, general
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.):on the image
Other Notes:
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Title: It Better to Stay Away
URL:http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4704790/
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media:lineart/digital coloring
Any specific areas you want help with:geneal
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.):
Other Notes:I experiment with the shading in this piece
Title: Dragon of Andes´s Mountains
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4761214
Adult Content: No
Is it finished?: No
Media: Photoshop CS 2 + Tablet
Any specific areas you want help with: precision of the lines, anatomy, if it gives the illusion of wonder that I want, wings.
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): Comment, notes.
Other Notes: Thank you very much ^^
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Title: Espíritu de Los Andes
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4832606
Adult Content: No
Is it finished?: Yes
Media: Photoshop CS 2 + tablet
Any specific areas you want help with: precision of the landscape.
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): comment, notes.
Other Notes: It´s my first landscape ._.
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Title: Half-life: Opposing Force (With Kay)
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4620832/
Adult Content: No
Is it finished?: No
Media: Photoshop CS 2 + tablet
Any specific areas you want help with: proportions... 3D Depth, gun precision draw.
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): comment, notes.
Other Notes: No... It´s ok ^^
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URL:http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4819419/
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media: COPIC markers
Any specific areas you want help with: Praportions, Inking,
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): Send a Note
Other Notes: What do ya think?
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4202516/
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media: traditional ink
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): any form is fine
Title:Rajput Warrior Mouse
URL:http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4045993/
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media: digital
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): any form is fine
Title:PT And Aethe
URL:http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4563209/
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media: traditional marker and ink
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): any form is fine
Title: Throat Full of Glass
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4754403/
Adult Content: Gore
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Sai
Any specific areas you want help with: Lighting.
Where do you prefer that critiques are left? On the image.
Title: Zydrate Anatomy
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4851261
Adult Content: Drug use
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Sai
Any specific areas you want help with: Any
Where do you prefer that critiques are left? On the image
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4806879
Adult Content: Not adult but mature for naked?
Is it finished?: No, just sketches.
Media: Pencil
Any specific areas you want help with: Angles of the face, perspective in general. Anatomy in general ;-;
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): On the image is fine.
Title: sigh no more
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4736672
Adult Content: No
Is it finished?: Yes, but it's a sketch that can be easily edited.
Media: Pencil
Any specific areas you want help with: Nothing in particular, there's just something(s) odd about it and i can't place it.
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): On the image is fine.
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4685957
Adult Content: No
Is it finished?: Yes
Media: Photoshop Elements 7
Any specific areas you want help with: Shading and Hair
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): The submission
Other Notes: None
Title: Federal Signal 2t22 Siren WIP
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3940681
Adult Content: No
Is it finished?: No
Media: No. 2 Pencil for now
Any specific areas you want help with: Lines
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): The submission
Other Notes: None
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4858397
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Copic markers
Any specific areas you want help with: face, perspective
Where do you prefer that critiques are left: the submission
Other Notes: none
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4882353/
Adult Content: yes
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Digital art (openCanvas)
Any specific areas you want help with: Shape, accuracy, style, fluids
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): Submission comments
Other Notes: The art that is actually mine is: the blackest cock there, plus anything that is in colour.
Title: Over the Shoulder
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4709475/
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Digital art (SAI)
Any specific areas you want help with: Shape, accuracy, style, whiskers, background
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): Submission comments
Other Notes: I think his head looks cute in profile. You?
Title: Cat in Heat
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4351380/
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Digital art (SAI)
Any specific areas you want help with: Shape, accuracy, style, fur pattern, pose, eyes, ears, fan blade blur
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): Submission comments
Other Notes: The fur took me forever and I hope it looks good. And how's the face?
Title: Sparkz Perked
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4208869/
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Digital art (SAI)
Any specific areas you want help with: Shape, accuracy, style, pose, ear-tufts, inside-ear colour
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): Submission comments
Other Notes: I can't decide whether to have the inside of my ears light yellow, or the same colour as the rest of my fur. The former presents problems in some poses.
Title: bday wip
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4863422/
Adult Content: yes (pretty tame though)
Is it finished?: The actual drawing is now finished (not uploaded yet), but this is the sketch/wip version
Media: pencil
Any specific areas you want help with: closest character's legs/feet. Anything really.
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): on the submission, please
Other Notes: This is a birthday present to a friend. Even though I've finished it, I would still like some advice for next time.
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4844800
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media: digital
Any specific areas you want help with: Just an over all crit is what I am looking for on this one.
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): This journal or on the image is fine.
Other Notes: This one is finished so I am more looking for Crits on the feel/Look of the furbolg.
Title: Mere Parlor Ticks
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4713163
Adult Content: yes
Is it finished?: no
Media: digital
Any specific areas you want help with: Some help on the over all feel. I feel like there are some issues with the undead in the image.
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): This journal or on the image is fine.
Other Notes: Really wanting to finish this one up so any help with a way to do the line art would be great. Looking to try new things with this one.
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4730221/
Adult Content: No, but there is some blood
Media: Watercolor
Any specific areas you want help with: I really just want to know what you think about the piece. What did you like most, what didn't you like? Could it use a bit more of something? A bit less? Also any help with anatomy would be great, as I'm still working on it.
Is it finished?: Yes
Where do you prefer that critiques are left: On the submission page, please.
Other Notes: I have a wip of these bookmarks as pencil roughs, if that may help more in giving critique: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4375851/
Title: Cat!Cassandra cover
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3718711/
Adult Content: No
Media: Markers
Any specific areas you want help with: Cougar/cat anatomy, a better use of markers, backgrounds
Is it finished?: Yes
Where do you prefer that critiques are left: On the submission page, please.
Other Notes: I felt the bg of the pic was too plain, so I tried to put in symbols that mean something to the character. I don't feel that they work and that the symbols make the image too cluttered. What do you think of them?
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4766985
Adult Content: No.
Is it finished?: Yes.
Media: Photoshop Elements 8.
Any specific areas you want help with: The animation and the shading/lighting.
Where do you prefer that critiques are left: Submission page, please.
Other Notes: Done to be cropped and resized as an avatar later on (see here the finished product, used on # http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/download/file.php?avatar=35383_1289328980.gif).
Title: ANBU Iniki.
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4823597
Adult Content: No.
Is it finished?: Yes.
Media: Pencil sketch.
Any specific areas you want help with: Nothing really. General critique is okay.
Where do you prefer that critiques are left: Submission page, please.
Other Notes: Art of my Naruto fan character. I intended to do a lineart and colour it digitally, but never got the time.
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4863922
Adult Content: No.
Is it finished?: Yes (Art-wise).
Media: Digital (Gimp)
Any specific areas you want help with: What do you think in general? Anything off (art-wise)? Does this work for a site design?
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): Submission comments
Other Notes: The exterior of the browser window was just put there for completeness - the Firefox theme is not mine of course ;)
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4726359/
Adult Content: No
Is it finished?: Yes?
Media: Photography
Any specific areas you want help with: Color. Still learning how to use the levels and curves in GIMP. Cropping.
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): Please feel free to note me or leave them on the piece itself.
Other Notes: KOI FEEDING FRENZY! NOM NOM NOM!
Title: Koi 2
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4726365/
Adult Content: No
Is it finished?: Yes?
Media: Photography
Any specific areas you want help with: Color and cropping.
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): Please feel free to note me or leave them on the piece itself.
Title: Slide Creek
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4785848/
Adult Content: Tasteful Nudity
Is it finished?: No
Media: Pencil and Paper
Any specific areas you want help with: My anatomy fail. Where should I put the male's legs? Is this interesting at least?
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): Please feel free to note me or leave them on the piece itself.
Other Notes: Trying to do a stylized version of otters but not sure if the wonky anatomy is killing it.
Thank you for your time!
Title: Screw Gravity 2
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4899308
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media:COPIC markers and colord piencels
Any specific areas you want help with: Form, Perspective, Coloring, Shading, Highlights, and anything els you think i can inprove on.
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): Via image.
Other Notes: Thank you!
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4923914
Adult Content: yes/no
Is it finished?: yes/no
Media: Traditonal
Any specific areas you want help with: Just.. In generald
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): Image
Other Notes: Be nice D:
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4958513/
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: no
Media: Paint tool sai
Any specific areas you want help with: Anatomy
Where do you prefer that critiques are left: On the image
Other Notes: None
Title: Climb Aboard
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4960893
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Digital art (SAI)
Any specific areas you want help with: Shape, accuracy, style, pose, cabbit's fur, cabbit's irises
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): Submission comments
Other Notes: I'm not sure if I did well on my fur that is ruffled where his hindpaws are standing. And what do you guys think of the effect I put on my irises?
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5013052/
Adult Content: Yes (for nudity)
Is it finished?: No
Media: Traditional
Any specific areas you want help with: Character design. Does it grab you? And tear your throat out?
Where do you prefer that critiques are left: Comment on the image
Other Notes: Kthxbye
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4917914
Adult Content: Mature
Is it finished?: Yes
Media: poetry
Any specific areas you want help with: Not in particular
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): Comments section on the URL
Other Notes:
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5049741
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: no
Media: pencil
Any specific areas you want help with: just point out where any errors are and why and how would I correct it.
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): image if you would please
Other Notes:
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URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5041604/
Adult Content: rated mature
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Writing
Any specific areas you want help with: general
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): note or comment section
Other Notes:
URL:http://www.furaffinity.net/full/5107590/
Adult Content: yes (though it shows no naughty bits)
Is it finished?: yes
Media: digital (Manga Studio EX 4)
Any specific areas you want help with: dot toning, line work, also tips on how to use MangaStudio
Where do you prefer that critiques are left: on the image plz
Other Notes: I'm fully aware that it's January, so i hope someone will see this.
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5089247
Adult Content: No
Is it finished?: No, I plan to color this
Media: pencil sketch
Any specific areas you want help with: all around, although I'd like the most help on the face, and making it look really mad. I'm also having trouble with a stripe that runs up Cinnamon's nose and between his eyes. I'm unsure how it would distort under his arching eyebrows.
Where do you prefer that critiques are left: in the comments are fine
Other Notes: A January journal hasn't been put up, so if you don't mind, I'll put it up here
Title: Midnight -sketch-
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5126120
Adult Content: No
Is it finished?: No, I plan to color this also
Media: pencil sketch
Any specific areas you want help with: the pose in general
Where do you prefer that critiques are left : comments section
Other Notes: I know I should fix the right hand, but if there's anything else I should correct, I'd like to know.
Title: Barepawed cat
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5166854/
Adult Content: No
Is it finished?: Yes, although I might color it. I'm not decided yet.
Media: pencil sketch
Any specific areas you want help with: the pose in general, and advice on the hands and feet. I had a lot of trouble on the right foot in particular. I'd also like to know how I can do the clothes better.
Where do you prefer that critiques are left : comments section
Other Notes: none
Thanks.
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/full/4918244/
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Pencil
Any specific areas you want help with: general, mostly along the suggestions of coloring and reshaping
Where do you prefer that critiques are left: Anywhere, whether comment section or message, as long as I know what it was talking about, and it is not in a area that is really out of place.
Other Notes: None.
Title: Bunny
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5230037
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Pencil
Any specific areas you want help with: shading, and shaping
Where do you prefer that critiques are left: Anywhere, whether comment section or message, as long as I know what it was talking about, and it is not in a area that is really out of place.
Other Notes: none.
URL:http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5248522/
Adult Content: yes
Is it finished?: no
Media:
Any specific areas you want help with:
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): by note, comment, idk
Other Notes:
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5139945
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media: pencil
Any specific areas you want help with:
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.):
Other Notes: On the picture itself please
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4784126
Adult Content: No
Is it finished?: Yes
Media: Story
Any specific areas you want help with: Grammar and others mistakes that can be spotted
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): Notes
Other Notes: None
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5383756
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Copic Makers, Coloed pincels, White out.
Any specific areas you want help with: Colloring, form, style.
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): On image
Other Notes: Nope
URL:http://www.furaffinity.net/full/5384486/
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Digital Corel Painter Essentials 4
Any specific areas you want help with: I just can't get the torso
Where do you prefer that critiques are left: I'd prefer it on my picture. It'd be the only comment it has.
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/555...../#cid:40819271
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media: SAI
Any specific areas you want help with: anatomy proportions/foreshortening
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): on the image
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5567763/
Adult Content: No
Is it finished?: yes
Media: SAI
Any specific areas you want help with: style, coloring, proportion, form,wathever looks wrong xS
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): the way that will make you it easier
Title: p´wqfejåiej
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5430713
Adult Content: No
Is it finished?: yes
Media: SAI
Any specific areas you want help with: style, coloring, proportions, form, body, wathever look wrong D:
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): the way that will make you it easier
Title: fñddejdpojdep
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5426311
Adult Content: No
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Photoshop CS3
Any specific areas you want help with: background, body, style, proportions, form, coloring, effects, wathever look wrong D:
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): the way that will make you it easier
Title: Rape D:
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5529191/
Adult Content: Yes
Is it finished?: yes
Media: SAI
Any specific areas you want help with: the bodies, proportions, form, coloring effects, idea, wathever look wrong D:
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): the way that will make you it easier :]
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4967069
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: no
Media: Pencil and paper
Any specific areas you want help with: Neck/shoulder anatomy viewed sideways
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): Comment on the picture itself or note anything that gives me a little warning on the top left corner xD
Other Notes: It is finished in the paper but I'm working on coloring and shading it on SAI but for the reason my character's neck doesn't feel right... also would like just some general opinions since I believe this piece to be my best one yet but it has very little views :(
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5605518
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Graphics Gale
Area to help with: Pixel Shading is a weakpoint for me especially since I just started. How does it look here.
Where to post: Comment in picture
URL: here
Adult Content: yes
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Digital / Paint Tool SAI
Any specific areas you want help with: Any tips, critique, etc
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): comments of image.
Other Notes: Be truthful. I can take some bad stuff and genuinely want to learn to get better.
Thanks ahead of time!
Title: Closer to the Edge
URL:http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5626180/#cid:41277584
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Copic Markers/liner, Picasa
Any specific areas you want help with: Back ground, form
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): On Image
Other Notes:N/A
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5657806
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Paint SAI
Any specific areas you want help with: any and all would be great
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): On Image
Other Notes: N/A
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2795546
Adult Content: yes.
Is it finished?: yes.
Media: Novella / Novelette, science fiction, mood and character piece with political and erotic themes.
Any specific areas you want help with: Narrative pacing, tempo, clarity of imagery, effective delineation of theme and character. In short, does the story work for you in technical terms?
Where do you prefer that critiques are left: On the story pages themselves.
Other Notes: This URL links to the first section ("Her Slow, Feline Smile") of a completed, eight part story. All sections have been posted on FA.
Title: "Lamia Dance"
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4490860
Adult Content: yes.
Is it finished?: yes.
Media: Short story, psychological horror with explicit details. "Exterior" description of psychotic state.
Any specific areas you want help with: Narrative pacing, tempo, clarity of imagery, effective delineation of bizarre mental state. Does the story work for you in technical terms?
Where do you prefer that critiques are left: On the story page itself.
Title: "The Vast Impatience of the Night"
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5163702
Adult Content: No, but story deals with adult issues of bereavement and mortality.
Is it finished?: yes.
Media: Short story, fantasy with horror elements, mood and character piece.
Any specific areas you want help with: Narrative pacing, tempo, clarity of imagery, effective delineation of theme, character, and setting. Does the story work for you?
Where do you prefer that critiques are left: On the story page.
Title: "The Weight of its Awareness"
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5654303
Adult Content: No, but the story features graphically violent, monstrous imagery.
Is it finished?: yes.
Media: Short story, horror, fantasy mood piece.
Any specific areas you want help with: Narrative pacing, tempo, clarity of imagery, effective delineation of mood and setting. In short, as always, does the story work for you in technical terms?
Where do you prefer that critiques are left: On the story page itself.
Thank you for reading these requests!
Mark Usk
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5751544
Adult Content: no (aside from profanity, there is no sexual references or subliminal/explicit messaging)
Is it finished?: Uncertain
Media: Music (Hardstyle, Screamo/Metal, Industrial combination)
Any specific areas you want help with: All of it, I am a perfectionist by nature. It needs to be at it's best.
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): As a comment on the submission, notes are welcome too however.
Other Notes: This song is different... a never before done combination/style... at least as far as I know.
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5258723/
Adult Content: No (it is vore, though)
Is it finished?: Yes
Media: Flash, from Windows Movie Maker video, from MSPaint pictures.
Any specific areas you want help with: Nah, critique any and everything that seems wrong to you (proportions, consistency, fluidity, sound, anything).
Where do you prefer that critiques are left: On the submission page.
Title: Wolf & Zera
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5719990/
Adult Content: yes
Is it finished?: yes
Media: MSPaint
Any specific areas you want help with: Proportions, anatomy.
Where do you prefer that critiques are left: On the submission page.
Other notes: My goal is only to draw their naked forms well, titilation is not at all intended so don't suggest anything to make it sexier.
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6110884
Adult Content: No
Is it finished?: Yes
Media: Adobe flash CS5
Any specific areas you want help with: None really
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): Comment on picture plz
Other Notes: It's interactive ^^
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/642...../#cid:46477823
Adult Content: No
Is it finished?: Yes
Media: Photoshop 7.0
Specific: Lighting, Water FX, Anatomy
Where do you prefer that critiques are left: On the submission
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6421264/
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media: ...camera?
Any specific areas you want help with: angle, lighting, etc. No preference
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): on the image please :)
Other Notes:
Title: Morning glorys 2/2
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6421316/
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media: ...camera?
Any specific areas you want help with: angle, lighting, etc. No preference
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): on the image please :)
Other Notes:
Title: Sunrise
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6424596
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media: ...camera?
Any specific areas you want help with: angle, lighting, etc. No preference
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): on the image please :)
Other Notes:
Title: Table again
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6426177
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media: ...camera?
Any specific areas you want help with: angle, lighting, etc. No preference
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): on the image please :)
Other Notes: didnt edit this one
Thank youuu
Title: The Mysterious Icecave
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5804077
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media: traditional, acrylics on paper
Any specific areas you want help with: I'm sometimes having difficulty with perspective/angles
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): on the image will do fine
Other Notes: this painting I consider one of my best yet, but I have yet to get some real feedback on it :)
Title: Master's Pet (Teaser Rewrite)
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6668459
Adult Content: yes
Is it finished?: no
Media: Written
Any specific areas you want help with: Narrative pacing, tempo, clarity of imagery, effective delineation of mood and setting. In short, as always, does the story work for you in technical terms?
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): in this journal, submission file or note is ok.
Other Notes:
Thanks in advance for the critique
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6699325/
Adult Content: yes
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Digital art, Paint Tool SAI. Lineart.
Any specific areas you want help with: Just in general. I have trouble with snouts mainly and getting an "anthro" look.
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): Note please, if its not too much trouble.
Other Notes: Please, if you critique, tell me you found me here so I dont think you're completely random.
Title: [PERSONAL] Monochrome Cuddles
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6695258/
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Digital art, Paint Tool SAI. Monochrome.
Any specific areas you want help with: The general idea of it being monochrome. I just started doing monochrome things. Also anatomy, and in general.
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): Note please, if its not too much trouble.
Other Notes: Please, if you critique, tell me you found me here so I dont think you're completely random.
Title: [REF] Rayne [HERM ver.]
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6664342/
Adult Content: yes
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Digital art, Paint Tool SAI. Reference Sheet.
Any specific areas you want help with: General. Anatomy. Mainly the idea that its a reference sheet. How good is it set up, how can it look better, etc.
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): Note please, if its not too much trouble.
Other Notes: Please, if you critique, tell me you found me here so I dont think you're completely random.
Title: [AT] Falla for Clandestine
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6638179/
Adult Content: yes
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Digital art, Paint Tool Sai.
Any specific areas you want help with: General. Coloring, shading, lighting, anatomy, anything.
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): Note please, if its not too much trouble.
Other Notes: Please, if you critique, tell me you found me here so I dont think you're completely random.
All of these are my favorite recent works. Meaning if I like them, I dont see anything wrong with them. This is why I want critiques on them specifically. Anyone reading this, feel free to critique my whole gallery as well if you feel like it. Thanks in advance.
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5441323/
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes, but with a bug or two
Media: Flash
Any specific areas you want help with: Just general feedback :)
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): on the image please :D
Other Notes: Thank you in advance! And dont be afraid to tell me it needs work! :D
Title: World Ablaze
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6373864
Adult Content: No
Is it finished?: No
Media: Written
Any specific areas you want help with: Style, techinque, English
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): Comments if you'd like note is fine too
Other Notes: Please take in consideration my native tongue isn't English. Also that it's not finished thats all
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7677510
Adult content: yes? (don't know if a naked butt counts)
Is it finished: No
Media: traditional pencil and paper, paint tool sai
Any specific areas you want help with: general anatomy, especially on arms and hands.
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): on the image please! but I am fine with notes too. :)
Other Notes: Thank you in advance!! And don't be afraid to say anything, I take all critique as creative criticism. :D
Url: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7710354/
Adult Content: no
Finished: yes
Media: Digital
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8272216/
Adult Content: no, but perverted
Is it finished?: no
Media: Digital
Any specific areas you want help with: Just...anatomy. I reeeeaaallly need help with it. >.<
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): Comments or notes. Don't care.
Other Notes: Slightly perverted typical sketch of Renamon with some minuscule personal changes. Please don't only point out the good.
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8358722/
Adult Content: yes
Is it finished?: no
Media: Photoshop
Any specific areas you want help with: painting juicey bits
Where do you prefer that critiques are left: on the image
Other Notes: Adult content, so be warned <_< >_>
Title:JK♥
URL:part1 http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8469910/ part2 http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8469923/
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media: writing
Any specific areas you want help with:
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.):on the image
Other Notes: nonanthro, dark
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URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8928171/
Adult Content: yes (non-sexual nudity)
Is it finished?: no
Media: digital
Any specific areas you want help with: Most of what I'm struggling with is mentioned in the description, but also looking for suggestions on features. I also am wondering about her face, if it's proportioned correctly and semmetrical and all that.
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): on the image
Other Notes: Sometime soon I will be posting a version of this with all the draft lines. I'll probably repost this critique request at that point. Thank you!
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9423792/
Adult Content: Nope
Is it finished?: Minus maybe some touch ups, yes.
Media: Music
Any specific areas you want help with: Mixing/Mastering
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): On the entry is fine, who knows, maybe it'll prove to be insightful for someone else reading it as well.
Other Notes: There's background noise, can't really avoid that one. So, suffice to say I'm aware of that issue.
Thanks!
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9668861/
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: no
Media:Graphic
Any specific areas you want help with: proportion/ shape/ anatomy
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): image page comments
Other Notes: note that it is a really rough sketch, none of the lines are final. neither are the colors.
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9896312/
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: no
Media: Writing
Any specific areas you want help with: Tell me if its confusing, bland, uninteresting, etc.
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): Comments in the submission.
Other Notes: This is the rough draft, After feedback I will make changes and then post again.
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6203657
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: no
Media: Writing
Any specific areas you want help with: I need to know if it is written well, if the reader is able to follow what is going on and if it is well liked and enjoyed.
Where do you prefer that critiques are left (in this journal, on the image, via note, etc.): Comments in the submission.
Other Notes: There are links to more chapters in the author's notes. I would like to try and publish it, but I definitely want feedback to help me know how well the story is progressing.