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Critique Requests - Spring 2013
12 years ago
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Welcome to the Spring 2013 Critique Request Journal. All are welcome to participate, whether or not they are members, but please read the rules before posting!
RULES:
1. You may submit ONLY your own art for critique.
2. Cut, paste and fill out the form (below) for EACH individual piece you want critiqued.
3. All art types are welcome (visual, music, writing, etc.) - be sure specify the medium in your request, so people with expertise in that medium can find you more easily.
4. Please limit your total number of pieces linked to 5 per journal, so as not to spam/overwhelm other users. Whenever possible, please post multiple image URLs into a single comment.
5. Be polite and respecful, and leave constructive feedback whenever you can.
6. Trolls and troublemakers will be unceremoniously banned.
7. Have fun!
RULES:
1. You may submit ONLY your own art for critique.
2. Cut, paste and fill out the form (below) for EACH individual piece you want critiqued.
3. All art types are welcome (visual, music, writing, etc.) - be sure specify the medium in your request, so people with expertise in that medium can find you more easily.
4. Please limit your total number of pieces linked to 5 per journal, so as not to spam/overwhelm other users. Whenever possible, please post multiple image URLs into a single comment.
5. Be polite and respecful, and leave constructive feedback whenever you can.
6. Trolls and troublemakers will be unceremoniously banned.
7. Have fun!
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10441857/
Adult Content: yes (blood)
Is it finished?: yes
Media: digital
Specifics you want help with: anatomy.
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10073891/
Adult Content: No
Is it finished: Yes
Media: Digital
Specifics you want help with: Lighting and background
Preferred contact: Comments are fine, notes too. Criticiser's preference there.
URL: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/10440669/
Adult Content: No
Is it finished?: Yes
Media: Digital
Specifics you want help with: Anatomy and Shading
Preferred contact: Comments
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10288679/
Adult Content: yes [tasteful nude]
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Color Pencil; Prismacolor
Specifics you want help with: highlights and shadows
Preferred contact: Whatever works best, but preferred comments on the piece
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9867079/
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: no
Media: Digital Art
Specifics you want help with: Anatomy and folds of clothes
Preferred contact:Comments, please.
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10439001/
Adult Content: No
Is it finished?: No
Media: Digital
Specifics you want help with: Anatomy and shading, and maybe the character design itself.
Preferred contact: in comments/via notes/email/etc. Notes or comments. Whichever you prefer.
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9837946/
Adult Content: yes (Only at the beginning and can be skipped if you prefer)
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Story
Specifics you want help with: I want critique on characterization. Your opinions of them, whether or not they're likable, if they're interesting, if their decisions and thoughts are logical, if you emphasize with the 3 characters... ect.
Preferred contact: comments or notes
Note: This is one chapter from a part of a series, so plot events may be a bit confusing.
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9423548/
Adult Content: No
Is it finished?: No
Media: Visual/Digital
Specifics you want help with: Character design
Preferred contact: Comments
I need help with this guy! I'm not sure if he "reads" properly, his bio's here
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9412862/
Adult Content: yes [Guns]
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Photography
Specifics you want help with: Anything you feel would work better
Preferred contact: Any form, comments I'd prefer
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10472150/
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Traditional
Specifics you want help with: I would love to know if I'm improving on the anatomy of a cat, from my last picture
I drew of her here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10401279/ Thanks! :3
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10472121/
Adult Content: yes (nudity)
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Digital painting
Specifics you want help with: Anything that I could improve on.
Preferred contact: in comments or notes, whatever is easiest.
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10476289/
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media: digital
Specifics you want help with: canine (fox) non-anthro/feral anatomy.
Preferred contact: notes/e-mail.
Title: [Request] Wolves Fun
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6933743/
Adult Content: yes
Is it finished?: yes
Media: digital
Specifics you want help with: canine (wolf) non-anthro/feral anatomy.
Preferred contact: notes/e-mail.
Title: [SKT] Lua Sketchdump
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8148548/
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: no
Media: digital
Specifics you want help with: otter non-anthro/feral anatomy.
Preferred contact: notes/e-mail.
Title: Lyza's Night Out
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7548004/
Adult Content: yes
Is it finished?: yes
Media: digital
Specifics you want help with: lighting/shading (I'm already aware about the anatomy problems and they already were resolved... )
Preferred contact: notes/e-mail.
URL: link
Adult Content: yes
Is it finished?: yes
Media: digital
Specifics you want help with: I'm not sure with the lioness anatomy/perspective, they seem to be a little off...
Preferred contact: in comments
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10379166/
Adult Content: Yes [Erotica].
Is it finished?: Yes.
Media: Story.
Specifics you want help with: Full review/critique.
Preferred contact: Note.
Title: TOTAL LUVCOW 03
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9857406/
Adult Content: Yes [Erotica].
Is it finished?: Yes.
Media: Story.
Specifics you want help with: Full review/critique.
Preferred contact: Note.
Title: Gato de Riozonaas 01
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10592676/
Adult Content: Yes [Semi-Erotica, Violence].
Is it finished?: Yes.
Media: Story.
Specifics you want help with: Full review/critique.
Preferred contact: Note.
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8939230/
Adult Content: No
Is it finished?: Yes
Media: Traditional
I realize that the right hand is a bit off in perspective and the left one is off a bit in size, but I'd greatly appreciate some critique/constructive criticism if offered. Thank you.
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/11125947/
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: no
Media: Digital
Specifics you want help with: Anatomy, perspective and colouring
Preferred contact: comments, notes, Steam or Skype.
URL: http://nereza-darkblood.deviantart......-WIP-387199196
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: no
Media: digital painting
Specifics you want help with: proportion atmosphere emotion body language or anything that could help improve the overall picture.
(besides adding detail as it currently being added to the painting as mentioned this is a work in progress)
Preferred contact: in comments via notes (DA / FA)
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/11110094/
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: Yes
Media: Digital
Specifics you want help with: Anatomy, perspective and colouring
Preferred contact: notes or Skype.
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/11232023/
Adult Content: yes ( erotica)
Is it finished?: no
Media: Sketched with pencils planing to finish in digital
Specifics you want help with:Anatomy/perspective
Preferred contact: in comments
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/11637140/
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Pencil (graphite)
Specifics you want help with: Anatomy, shading, perspective
Preferred contact: in comments
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/11629997/
Adult Content: yes (it's only a bulge, but hey)
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Pencil (graphite)
Specifics you want help with: Anatomy, shading, perspective
Preferred contact: in comments
URL:http://www.furaffinity.net/view/11789251/
Adult Content: maybe (if murder counts)
Is it finished?: yes (or this one)
Media: story
Specifics you want help with: character desige and plot paceing and anything else
Preferred contact: in comments/via notes
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/11916279/
Adult Content: No
Is it finished?: Yes
Media: Digital Artwork
Specifics you want help with: Anatomy, linework, anything, really
Preferred contact: Notes
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/11915585/
Adult Content: yes
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Digital Artwork
Specifics you want help with: Lighting and anotomy
Preferred contact: Notes
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/12059846/
Adult Content: yes
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Lineart in traditional and colored in digital
Specifics you want help with: anatomy and shading
Preferred contact: in comments/via notes
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10679038/
Adult Content: Yes
Is it finished?: Yes
Media: Writing
Specifics you want help with: The sex scene, anatomy, descriptions
Preferred contact: Via notes
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/12580351/
Adult Content: yes
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Visual, Digital, Flat Colour
Specifics you want help with: Composition, use of colour, and visual "pop" of focal points
Preferred contact: Comments preferably, though Notes are fine for feedback you wish to remain private
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/12444252/
Adult Content: yes
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Ink pens and colored pencils
Specifics you want help with: anatomy, color/shading, general critique
Preferred contact: In comments
ULR: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/13966946/
Adult content: no
Finished: yes
Media: pencil, story
Specifics: how's my writing
Contact: notes
Title: Reel's magic show (vore story)
ULR: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/13883453/
AC:no
Finished: yes
Media: pencil, story
Specifics: how's my writing
Contact: notes
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/16123154/
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media: MS Paint
Specifics you want help with: Making sure my perspective angles are alright and overall opinion on quality of work.
Preferred contact: in comments/notes
Title: Female Figure Study #1
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/16195724/
Adult Content: yes
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Digital
Specifics you want help with: Anatomy
Preferred contact: comments or notes
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Title: Tied Down Cookies
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/15639652/
Adult Content: yes
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Traditional
Specifics you want help with: Anatomy
Preferred contact: comments or notes
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Thank you!
URL: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/22505864/
Adult Content: no
Is it finished?: yes
Media: Digital, Color
Specifics you want help with: Any that you see I might need to fix for my next one. (Mostly lighting and shading)
Preferred contact: in comments/via notes/email/etc.
URL: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/28028042/
Adult Content: no (tasteful language only)
Is it finished?: no
Media: Story
Specifics you want help with:Grammar and feedback (because I'm not French by born)
Preferred contact: comments, notes or email
URL:https://www.furaffinity.net/view/32453522
Adult Content: kind of
Is it finished?: yes
Media: story
Specifics you want help with: anything really
Preferred contact: in comments
URL: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/55519117/
Adult Content: No
Is it finished?: Yes
Media: Digital
Specifics you want help with: Anatomy
Preferred contact: Notes or comments. Whichever you prefer.