Cocktease
18 years ago
General
So i hinted to everyone that i was going to write something that
hellkat and i had started off as a RP, but i think will be quickly turning into a dual writen story idea with all his favorit things at a mild enough setting that i can enjoy them.... This will contain all kinds of yummy things, but i don't want to give away too many spoilers.... Its actualy taking longer to write then i thought since i decided i REALLY wanna go through the whole thing nice and slow and take my time. In fact the whole RP might end up being two or even three posts in its own, and thats assuming me and him don't do anything else with it till i finish. So here is a sneak peak at Rai and Else, Sisters in Harmony.
In a mansion far outside of town, tucked in the middle of the forest, away from peeping eyes, was a nimble teenage girl. She was currently training in the gym. The massive mansion not only had a rather nice gym, but also a very nice obstacle course with all kinds of different challenges. This is where it struck her. She felt a sharp pain in her shoulders and immediately let go of the machine she was using. She leaned forward thinking she strained something at first, but the pain had stoped. Then it came again. It shot through her bones like as if sharp metal was being driven through them and splitting them apart, each, one by one. Minutes flew by, then hours... It seemed like a day of agony and pain. Like her whole body was slowly being pulled apart piece by piece in the most painful way possible. She passed out before it ended.
*****
Back in town was a slightly different story. A tall brown haired woman of slim build was breaking every rule by leaving her sister alone to go out on her little date. This is where the burning itch started. She excused herself and hurried off to the bathroom to a privet stall. She pulled her shirt up over her back and peeked over her shoulder. She expected to find a rash but instead she found a large patch of scales! She got wide eyed and then it hit her, a pain that made child birth seem like a stubbed toe. It was so painful she could only fall off the toilet to her knees on the floor. Her mouth open as if to scream but all that came out were high pitched squeaks of pure horror. her throat had almost closed as her whole body tensed from the incredible agony. She doubled over in mid change and puked her very fine expensive meal all over the floor. She was far from finished.
*****
Though for each of the sisters it would seem like a eternity in pain and agony, only a dozen or so minutes had actually passed. Rai and her older sister Elsa would be changed forever.
*****
She managed to pull herself to her feet. Crossing the gym floor over to the wall which was, by tradition of all gyms in the universe, mirrored. She placed her palms against the glass and steadied herself as she lifted her head, red hair falling from her eyes......... The shrieking scream echoed through the halls and sent birds to flight. She panted as she gazed at her reflection, gazing back at her.... gazing back at it... in total horror.... The once brown eyes were now bright red and had vertical slits. Her face had shifted from once a high cheek boned face of innocent cheerfulness to a short muzzle. Her hair went from a once dull red to a bright fiery orange, still just as short as ever. Her shirt had been destroyed, it had slipped from her when she stood. She twitched.... That is... Her wing twitched... She realized now as her vision cleared that she had wings, two large leathery wings. Her hands and feet ended in claws, razor sharp. Her tail swooshed back and forth behind her.... Her pants were still on, the tail had managed to rip through them so that they still fit. Her whole body was slightly taller, maybe a few inches, and a athletic build. Her tits, what little tits the teen had, were gone. instead she had powerful chest muscles void of nipples... Probably from the wings. She wouldn't miss them. she had only been teased about them. Her body was covered in a leathery sort of skin, almost like that over her wings. It was smooth yet strong at the same time. It reminded her of shark skin. Wings! WINGS! She could fly! She leaves the gym at top speed. She stopped when she made it outside, looking back... That was fast... She hops up and down in place... She felt springy, light, and full of energy. She was already in love with this body!
******
Elsa dragged herself from the stall. It was a disaster. Long claw marks all along the steel dividing walls, and the toilet lid had been ripped free and twisted into a mass of scrap metal. She stared into the mirror in horror.... Her beautiful skin... Ruined. Her small wings looked decorative since they weren't big enough to lift her. She still had her silky strait brown hair. She managed to sneak out the back and get to her care without anyone spotting her. She left a voice mail for her date. In it she apologized for leaving so quick but she had received a emergency phone call and needed to rush home, using back roads along the way hoping to not be seen. The drive was so uncomfortable from the fact that she was sitting on her tail, her clothes were to tight between her legs, and her wings didn't let her relax in the chair. She was glad when she made it out of town without anything getting worst.
*****To be continueD*****
So thats it for now. I'm going to write something else quickly and post it up to show off my smutty skills. I kinda like the title.... The rest of you who arn't already drooling at the hints will figure out what i mean when i get around to writing the rest..... Ok so i do need to log off which means nothing will be posted till probly around 10PM eastern time.... I hope.... it might take longer... heh.... I still don't believe in spellchecking much, except when it comes to writing stories! Obviosly i gotta spellcheck that stuff....
hellkat and i had started off as a RP, but i think will be quickly turning into a dual writen story idea with all his favorit things at a mild enough setting that i can enjoy them.... This will contain all kinds of yummy things, but i don't want to give away too many spoilers.... Its actualy taking longer to write then i thought since i decided i REALLY wanna go through the whole thing nice and slow and take my time. In fact the whole RP might end up being two or even three posts in its own, and thats assuming me and him don't do anything else with it till i finish. So here is a sneak peak at Rai and Else, Sisters in Harmony.In a mansion far outside of town, tucked in the middle of the forest, away from peeping eyes, was a nimble teenage girl. She was currently training in the gym. The massive mansion not only had a rather nice gym, but also a very nice obstacle course with all kinds of different challenges. This is where it struck her. She felt a sharp pain in her shoulders and immediately let go of the machine she was using. She leaned forward thinking she strained something at first, but the pain had stoped. Then it came again. It shot through her bones like as if sharp metal was being driven through them and splitting them apart, each, one by one. Minutes flew by, then hours... It seemed like a day of agony and pain. Like her whole body was slowly being pulled apart piece by piece in the most painful way possible. She passed out before it ended.
*****
Back in town was a slightly different story. A tall brown haired woman of slim build was breaking every rule by leaving her sister alone to go out on her little date. This is where the burning itch started. She excused herself and hurried off to the bathroom to a privet stall. She pulled her shirt up over her back and peeked over her shoulder. She expected to find a rash but instead she found a large patch of scales! She got wide eyed and then it hit her, a pain that made child birth seem like a stubbed toe. It was so painful she could only fall off the toilet to her knees on the floor. Her mouth open as if to scream but all that came out were high pitched squeaks of pure horror. her throat had almost closed as her whole body tensed from the incredible agony. She doubled over in mid change and puked her very fine expensive meal all over the floor. She was far from finished.
*****
Though for each of the sisters it would seem like a eternity in pain and agony, only a dozen or so minutes had actually passed. Rai and her older sister Elsa would be changed forever.
*****
She managed to pull herself to her feet. Crossing the gym floor over to the wall which was, by tradition of all gyms in the universe, mirrored. She placed her palms against the glass and steadied herself as she lifted her head, red hair falling from her eyes......... The shrieking scream echoed through the halls and sent birds to flight. She panted as she gazed at her reflection, gazing back at her.... gazing back at it... in total horror.... The once brown eyes were now bright red and had vertical slits. Her face had shifted from once a high cheek boned face of innocent cheerfulness to a short muzzle. Her hair went from a once dull red to a bright fiery orange, still just as short as ever. Her shirt had been destroyed, it had slipped from her when she stood. She twitched.... That is... Her wing twitched... She realized now as her vision cleared that she had wings, two large leathery wings. Her hands and feet ended in claws, razor sharp. Her tail swooshed back and forth behind her.... Her pants were still on, the tail had managed to rip through them so that they still fit. Her whole body was slightly taller, maybe a few inches, and a athletic build. Her tits, what little tits the teen had, were gone. instead she had powerful chest muscles void of nipples... Probably from the wings. She wouldn't miss them. she had only been teased about them. Her body was covered in a leathery sort of skin, almost like that over her wings. It was smooth yet strong at the same time. It reminded her of shark skin. Wings! WINGS! She could fly! She leaves the gym at top speed. She stopped when she made it outside, looking back... That was fast... She hops up and down in place... She felt springy, light, and full of energy. She was already in love with this body!
******
Elsa dragged herself from the stall. It was a disaster. Long claw marks all along the steel dividing walls, and the toilet lid had been ripped free and twisted into a mass of scrap metal. She stared into the mirror in horror.... Her beautiful skin... Ruined. Her small wings looked decorative since they weren't big enough to lift her. She still had her silky strait brown hair. She managed to sneak out the back and get to her care without anyone spotting her. She left a voice mail for her date. In it she apologized for leaving so quick but she had received a emergency phone call and needed to rush home, using back roads along the way hoping to not be seen. The drive was so uncomfortable from the fact that she was sitting on her tail, her clothes were to tight between her legs, and her wings didn't let her relax in the chair. She was glad when she made it out of town without anything getting worst.
*****To be continueD*****
So thats it for now. I'm going to write something else quickly and post it up to show off my smutty skills. I kinda like the title.... The rest of you who arn't already drooling at the hints will figure out what i mean when i get around to writing the rest..... Ok so i do need to log off which means nothing will be posted till probly around 10PM eastern time.... I hope.... it might take longer... heh.... I still don't believe in spellchecking much, except when it comes to writing stories! Obviosly i gotta spellcheck that stuff....
Von Krieger
~hellkat
And possibly fix your silly tard-grammar!
infernalburn00
~infernalburn00
OP
Shut up! *whines* I cut back on alot of dots.... i just did them in a weird order, and the third paragraph was the last one i wrote so i guess i was a little slacking on holding back the dots!
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