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CHAPTER 3 IS OUT
18 years ago
I had this dream last night where I was at a zoo and I fell into the fox+hyena pit. Then when I was in there THEY turned into A lion cub who bit me and sank his claws into my arm. The only way to get him off was to give it a hand job. GO DREAMS!
So chapter 3 is out (a day early) I wanted to have it done by 5:00 my time so figures i got it out at 6:00 XP
I have been pretty zoned these days. I've been living on tea and coffee (I'm trying to work up a really big kidney stone) Anywho If the quality of the comic sucks please let me know. I am happy with the plot so I am really looking for advice and critique on the technical aspect of it.
CHAPTER 4 is pretty well planned out. It features Lot's of quasi-consensual sex and then BETRAYAL! Chapter 5 is even MORE planned out and is going to get weird again- I am just going to keep on going till I get a job (and MAYBE after that if I can) Later all!
OH and thanks to everyone who watched and faved the comic! 8D
So chapter 3 is out (a day early) I wanted to have it done by 5:00 my time so figures i got it out at 6:00 XP
I have been pretty zoned these days. I've been living on tea and coffee (I'm trying to work up a really big kidney stone) Anywho If the quality of the comic sucks please let me know. I am happy with the plot so I am really looking for advice and critique on the technical aspect of it.
CHAPTER 4 is pretty well planned out. It features Lot's of quasi-consensual sex and then BETRAYAL! Chapter 5 is even MORE planned out and is going to get weird again- I am just going to keep on going till I get a job (and MAYBE after that if I can) Later all!
OH and thanks to everyone who watched and faved the comic! 8D
fritzywolf
~fritzywolf
Lol! I want lion handjob dreams xD
TheArchitect
~thearchitect
OP
heh I like the dream Matt had on page 17 better! XP
fritzywolf
~fritzywolf
Also good xD
hawse
~hawse
Personally, to me, teh art is second to the story line. You have teh hard part done, a good story line. The art is simple, but serves the purpose of illustrating the story really really well. All in all, a nice combination. I look forward to seeing more of this.
TheArchitect
~thearchitect
OP
thanks! I agree the story line is really important. But I hope I my illustration skill is at least serviceable enough to convey it.
hawse
~hawse
YES! Your illustration skill is assuredly up to the task, adn the more of it you illustrate, the better you will get at it! :)
TheArchitect
~thearchitect
OP
thats what I am hoping ^.^
BaddWill
~baddwill
Kudos on the kidney stone!
TheArchitect
~thearchitect
OP
oh it's not out yet- I'm saving up a reeeeaallly big rock that some day I will propose with to my one and only love
