-] State of the Art [-
18 years ago
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A journal about the art? Pshaw.
Okay, so like, I'm coming up on a bit of a stirring realization. It came when I recently had a batch of pictures that featured elongated torsos and I couldn't really notice it until I photoshopped them a bit shorter. Hopefully I've remedied that problem now, but it's a disturbing trend in my artwork- it's getting worse, not better. My art progress had been seeming to flatline a bit for a while, but now I worry that the things I've already established are beginning to decay. I notice myself stumbling to draw things that I used to bust out easily- things like eyes and heads and... proportions.
Now, it's a grabassing 'gotcha' to blame it on the fact that most of my drawings have ludicrous proportions, but drawing big boobs shouldn't have an effect on your ability to render toes. So I guess the point of this journal is a warning and a request. I'm gonna slowly be trying to re-establish myself, and so I'm most likely going to have a lot of mistakes. And what I want you guys to do, if you could, is to point out the ones you see to me. I always appreciate constructive criticism. Try to be as specific as you can, but even if you can't, just go ahead and express it anyway; I'll ask you some questions or something and we'll figure it out from there. I'd really appreciate that.
So in closing, please excuse any unintentionally goofy drawings from me, I'm workin' my way out. <.<;
Okay, so like, I'm coming up on a bit of a stirring realization. It came when I recently had a batch of pictures that featured elongated torsos and I couldn't really notice it until I photoshopped them a bit shorter. Hopefully I've remedied that problem now, but it's a disturbing trend in my artwork- it's getting worse, not better. My art progress had been seeming to flatline a bit for a while, but now I worry that the things I've already established are beginning to decay. I notice myself stumbling to draw things that I used to bust out easily- things like eyes and heads and... proportions.
Now, it's a grabassing 'gotcha' to blame it on the fact that most of my drawings have ludicrous proportions, but drawing big boobs shouldn't have an effect on your ability to render toes. So I guess the point of this journal is a warning and a request. I'm gonna slowly be trying to re-establish myself, and so I'm most likely going to have a lot of mistakes. And what I want you guys to do, if you could, is to point out the ones you see to me. I always appreciate constructive criticism. Try to be as specific as you can, but even if you can't, just go ahead and express it anyway; I'll ask you some questions or something and we'll figure it out from there. I'd really appreciate that.
So in closing, please excuse any unintentionally goofy drawings from me, I'm workin' my way out. <.<;
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Why are you not back in your cage, chained to the drawing board?
Pretend you did it all on purpose and fiercely defend your rights as an artist!
Generally I draw the 'skeleton' of a drawing first and then keep adding features. Maybe you could try that?
Also sometimes I also wonder if I am getting better or worse.
*High Five!*
Sorry, silliness....
1: Go back to your earlier work
2: Plagarize it like it was another 'flavor of the month' artist
3: ?????
4: Profit!
I just need to draw more, it seems like.
Oh, sorry. Yep, guaranteed only solution. xD
1) Begin looking at photographs and drawing from those. Every day. Whenever you have the change. Draw from life and get to learn how it ALL goes together.
2) draw the body first, then add in the boobs after the body's NORMAL proportions without exaggeration is correct.
3) Practice hands and feet on scrap paper or in OC or whatever your preferred method is. Do it over and over and over until you think you'll puke if you see another foot or hand. Then do ten more.
4) While this worked for me, my above are MUCH more helpful. Nonetheless, one of my other answers would be look at cartoons/anime/artists you LOVE the look to and try to draw their characters. Accurately. Copy poses to learn, figure out how it works.
5) In a single word, practice. Over and over and over again. (This is where I failed and have 8 years dry time now...)
Admittedly, these are the only things I can hand you for improvement advice, and I know they are very generic. All distortions and the like should be made once you get down how to draw the figure without distortion. If you are attempting to copy a "style", like the general look of Sonic or a specific anime, look and learn how the original official characters are drawn, and work from there.
Consistency (so says my room-mate Wyldsyde) comes from repeated practice in drawing any single character over and over. It follows that consistency in anatomy and proportion must logically follow from the same.
I wish you good luck, Nori dear.
Yours,
Mika Kyubi
Kitsune-at-Large
Are you single yet?
Just playing, I'll help the best I can. But your best bet is to look up tutorials and implement them again. They're all over the internet from how to draw a line to the most realistic nipple texture you have ever seen.
If your toes start to look like boobs, then you've been drawing too many boobs. ^_~
You could always try doing the oval thing, where you skecth out the figure and such using ovals and circles and such. Since you'd do the "body/torso" part before you add boobs, that might help to keep from stretching it out.
Most of the time, I haven't noticed this problem. There's only been a couple pics where I have, but my first thought was not "Her torso is too long" but "Her waist is too skinny". Maybe that's just something else you might want to think about. Instead of making them shorter, make them thicker. *shrugs* Worth a shot, if you run out of other ideas.
Other than that, hmm... *ponders* I don't know what else to say. My "skills of an artist" are about on par with Homsar's.