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Jaws of the Wolf Major Update
10 years ago
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I just completed a major update to Jaws of the Wolf. Due to issues with FA's file update, I had to re-submit the entry, so any faves will need to be re-done.
The story is updated to 4.06 (it may show up as 4.051 for a time, but it's the same). Though the overall story is the same, I made numerous updates.
The main changes include
Expanded scenes
Some additional character development
Minor tweaks in the descriptions, including making scenes less static.
Better attempts to maintain active voice, POV consistency, etc.
Possibly minor changes in my universe's continuity, though it would be subtle (doesn't effect this story).
And for this story, The Jaws of the Wolf, I made the title more relevant to the actual story.
The story is updated to 4.06 (it may show up as 4.051 for a time, but it's the same). Though the overall story is the same, I made numerous updates.
The main changes include
Expanded scenes
Some additional character development
Minor tweaks in the descriptions, including making scenes less static.
Better attempts to maintain active voice, POV consistency, etc.
Possibly minor changes in my universe's continuity, though it would be subtle (doesn't effect this story).
And for this story, The Jaws of the Wolf, I made the title more relevant to the actual story.
