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Wolf Pet rework now in progress
10 years ago
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Working on the 4.0 version of Wolf Pet, now.
Wolf Pet needs extensive work, considering its one of my oldest stories. I first wrote it in 1993 or 1994, in a college creative writing class. Due to the length limitations of the assignment (partially because we had to photocopy our stories for the entire class for critique) the story was much shorter, and very basic. I've since expanded the story, but it still needs much more work.
I'm fixing a lot of problem areas, to make the story as good as it can be. No, I'm not going to make the story sexual or a fetish piece, other than the incidental pieces described in the story, already. The main character does not enjoy, nor will enjoy his captivity, in this story.
As far as the fixes, I'm trying to do more characterization stuff, as well as changing how and when stuff is explained, which should improve the flow of the story.
Wolf Pet needs extensive work, considering its one of my oldest stories. I first wrote it in 1993 or 1994, in a college creative writing class. Due to the length limitations of the assignment (partially because we had to photocopy our stories for the entire class for critique) the story was much shorter, and very basic. I've since expanded the story, but it still needs much more work.
I'm fixing a lot of problem areas, to make the story as good as it can be. No, I'm not going to make the story sexual or a fetish piece, other than the incidental pieces described in the story, already. The main character does not enjoy, nor will enjoy his captivity, in this story.
As far as the fixes, I'm trying to do more characterization stuff, as well as changing how and when stuff is explained, which should improve the flow of the story.
