Those all definitely seem reasonable enough!
Though I think for the sketch page you should put into consideration how many sketches you would fit on that page. So maybe instead of just mentioning size, have a selection of number of sketches maybe?

i suppose it would depend on what sort of sketches i'd be doing. more headshot sketches will fit in compared to fullbodies, and it varies depending on the poses too...

i've def never done that type of commission before so i have 0 clue how to price them

I dont have much experience with those sorts of commissions either.
But in that case
maybe have a pricing range like you do for the pwyw sketches,
and negotiate the final price once you know what sort of sketches you will be doing.

that might be a good idea! thank you!

Everything looks good I think! But the bitty icons maybe higher? Also depending on what goes into your sketch page, price is from $20-40

oh yeah bitty icons are supposed to be $7 but i fucked up my own prices LOL

id say thats more than fair !!

irt sketch pages id say $20 is probably a good amount but only if youre talking like.. a relatively filled page?
you should probably have some sort of guideline (loose or otherwise) about the amount of things included on those, that way its a little more clear on exactly what youre charging For you feel me

other than that, again, totally fair!! in fact youd probably be able to go up on some of those as needed. your art is great B~)

yeah i wasn't planning on having sketch pages that'll be filled up to every inch but i'd try to make sure the pages look lively and that all the space is utilized well

that's why there's so many question marks after it cus i really have no idea how to go about that particular type but wanted to try offering it for ppl who preferred sketches over finished art