Ooh! I wonder what tiny ronak is going to get up to at the fun center!

Also First!!!

A door opens wif a bunch of littles wif water guns filled with cheese sauce charge !!!!!!!!

Ronak's a fantastic writer!

Hmmm, methinks Ronak is about to make some friends!

Ah this is a cute one

Ronak looks to be in for a wonderful surprise. He'll definitely have guys that will take genuinely good care of him.

Seems like he is getting smaller

Implied regression already.

heckin COOT!
Ronak is an awesome writer too.

Cute as shit<3

absolootly love how shy he looks in the last panal

With the scared/embarrassed look on his face, and the "bless my stars", I'm guessing this is someone he knows and that blush tells me he'd rather not have her(?) see him here and like this.

I am hopeful that he is quite surprised and pleased at how it turns out. (also, guessing what they might give him is "a family".

Really sweet. Thank you for drawing the pictures and thank you Ronak for writing and paying for this to happen. :)

I can say you are close, but your assessment is incorrect. You'll find out in the next comic page who addressed my OC.

This is so Adorable, the look on his face. This would be a dream come true to me if i was him. This is gonna be good i can feel it.

Thanks again for the comic. Already brainstorming a new page for the comic.

Wouldn't the general plot stracture be laid out before you started commissioning this? That how I write stories, start at start and end, then figure out the characters, motivations and such, path a path where that would naturally take them from the start to end, then you fill up dialogue and behaviours from there...

Oh, I have the story start to end set up ready to go. And we are already up to page 14. I'm just brainstorming how the scenes look for page 15 and onward. Knowing the story is one thing. Sorting out how the scenes are drawn is another matter. Like, I have the picture in my head of the whole thing from start to finish, I just need to have them sorted out in a way that lets the story itself flow in a comic fashion in a way that makes sense. I hope that clears up what I mean.

So, you scripted the story AND the comic panels/composition?
That's really cool! Keep it up :D

Thanks. I only wish I had artistic talent visually like Star.

My dad would have said are ya having fun son? If my dad was still in my life

He so evil! He made you draw a car!
That why we should cycle and use trains and trams to get everywhere, so star won't have to draw cars!

Trains? Hmmmmm...... that brings up a clever new idea in my head. One I plan to pitch to Star at a later time, but will hold off til I have this series pages finished.

Electric train like TGV?

Maybe, not sure on that part yet.

Heheh, someone's cheeks just got very red

I have a feeling he’s gonna need to use that diaper soon. Least he’s got to cute mommies to take care of him.

awwwhhh he became so smoll <3

I wish whats going on with ronak happend with me to

XD lol *last pic started ronak* i love this comics

Well his new mummys have said about an offer before wonder if it to be breastfed. They wanna see if he truly is the baby he shows signs of being. So belive his new mummys want to feed him naturally as hes small enough to be carried and cradled by them.