You know I will! I look forward to watching you improve with this effort too! ^O^

But is there something you find off with my work? I've already written down lighting and over-detailing

I'll report it as I find it, Crow! Just hit me up on Discord and I'll point out things!

I'm not an artist myself, so I can't really speak towards some of the finer details...

If I had to pick something, I'd say I've noticed a lot of your work doesn't have much in the way of backgrounds, which can make some of them feel unfinished. But that's not much to do with style, I think.

Your body shapes are very nice looking you've mastered the body shape of a woman! The only thing I found you could improve is your shading. It looks nice however the lighting is bouncing all over the place, try to imagine a single light in your image so the shading isn't all over the place. Perhaps backgrounds could be something else you could work on but no comment because I don't even draw backgrounds xD here's hoping you improve! Cheers